Swept Away, a follow-up

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"Hi John,

You edited my two pieces from the _______ google groups page.  At first, I was a bit overwhelmed by your comments, but I am writing to thank you for your help.  This is my first ever "job" in writing, I have only ever written for personal pleasure.  A good slap in the face is just what I needed to center my thinking.

I look forward to any additional editing that you do on my pieces.

Thanks again
____ "
 
That was refreshing.
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—John Dunphy