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baudolino
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This weekend, I attended one of the local gov. program "writing resume in

English"

Instructor ( korean ) gave us some printouts for a reference.

And I found these odd writings in sample sentences.

Ex 1.: "I enjoy and feel passionate about the assistant manager in the marketing which I think serves as the basis to build a successful career in your company."

Ex 2. : " Your marketing analyst is the ideal platform, in my opinion, on which I can grow as a true professional in the marketing."

what do you think about these sentences?

 

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